Narrative Writing
Essays Written by A* students
Story - A Dare
Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘It was my fault so I decided to do something about it.
October/November 2022-Cambridge International AS Level-8021/12-ENGLISH GENERAL PAPER
Narrative: Taking responsibility for a mistake
Acknowledging the fault & steps taken
Brainstorming Ideas.
Personal growth and learning from the experience
Essay
It was a hot summer day, and I was sitting on the porch of my childhood home, lost in my thoughts. I couldn't stop thinking about the argument I had had with my sister the day before. The argument was about a family vacation, I had suggested a destination that she thought was too expensive while she had suggested a place that I found boring. It was all because of a misunderstanding but it had escalated quickly and ended with her storming out of the house, refusing to speak to me.
I knew that it was my fault. I had let my emotions get the better of me and said things I shouldn't have. I had hurt my sister. It was my fault so I decided to do something about it.
So, I decided to do something about it. I got up from the porch and walked to my sister's house. I knocked on the door, and she answered, her expression cold and distant.
"Can we talk?" I asked, my voice barely above a whisper.
She hesitated for a moment, then nodded and gestured for me to come in. We sat down at the kitchen table, and I took a deep breath, ready to apologize for my behavior.
"I'm sorry," I said, looking her in the eyes. "I know I said some hurtful things yesterday, and I didn't mean any of them. I was just angry, and I let my emotions get the better of me."
My sister looked at me for a moment, then nodded. "I know," she said. "I was angry too. But I shouldn't have let it escalate like that."
We talked for hours, clearing the air and resolving our issues. I knew that it wasn't going to be easy to repair our relationship, but I was willing to do whatever it takes. It was my fault, and I was determined to take responsibility for my actions and make things right.
From that day forward, I made sure to always think before I spoke and to be more mindful of my actions. I knew that it was my responsibility to make things right, and I was determined to do just that.